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Simply sitting
I collect pieces of my emotions
I throw them like dice
To see where they will go

Simply breathing
With no purpose to exist
I am naked in this mist
And all around is free of me

And the void lurks in
And pours itself into my brain
It evaporates my skin
It envelops my body

When there is nothing to loose
And there is nowhere to go to
I am simply sitting
I am letting it all be
I felt piece with myself today
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:icondogviolet:
I wish I could do this! Beautifully written, as always!
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Elendurwen Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. And common, everybody can do anything they want, with patience and practise ;)
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:icondogviolet:
You're welcome! Haha yes, mostly. :)
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:icondoolhoofd:
Writing is a gamble.
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Elendurwen Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you mean by that?
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:icondoolhoofd:
"I collect pieces of my emotions
I throw them like dice"

> I thought you were talking about your poems.
My writing to me is always a gamble, a game with words and ideas, an experiment with the world.
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Elendurwen Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I see.. no the whole poem is about a state in meditation, where you sort of observe yourself but try not to intervene with whatever comes into your consciousness.

So you never try to achieve anything by writing? For me it is never a gamble, I go through my poems and pictures over and over until I find them ok to be finished with. Maybe I take myself too seriously though..
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:icondoolhoofd:
Of course I think about what I write. I let a few people test-read a text, try it out on psychedelic.be before I make a translation for deviantart. Patience is the key to a complete work.
I just express my thoughts as beautifully as I can. The goal is to make people think. And maybe get published, I'm working on that.
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dogyjoe Nov 25, 2012   Writer
To tell you the truth, it really is simple :)

Nice work. I like it.
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Elendurwen Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ;)
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