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Immediate

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Immediate
Collections of neural signals
Segregated moments
Of undisclosed reality

Uncensored
Fragmented instances of time
Electric waves
Absorbed and propagated

Immediate
Events drip like blood
Carriers of life and death
So pointless in their beauty

Inevitable
Percepts disattached
Their frequency numbs
Emotional consciousness

Recurring
State of unbounded awareness
Unconditional
Fade into raw existence
I would say one of my best attempts so far to capture the state of mind I (thanks god) manage to achieve without drugs now. A state when one looses herself in immediate reality and perceives as things around flow through the body and mind, without emotionally attaching to them. It is when one feels so beautifully simple and yet able to embrace all complexities of the world around. Hard to explain in other ways than in metaphors of the presented poetry.
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Nestharon's avatar
Well, it is very well written, and the metaphors are very well used. Also, I understand how you feel and what you are trying to tell us in your artist comment. I know it because when I write I enter in a meditative state, and no I do not use drugs, never did :) but simply when I open my writing tool or I take the pencil I enter in a state or trance if you wish :) and I start to write. The feeling is amazing, with pure meditation you can achieve it as well, and you don't have to use any human made materials to achieve the state where you open up.