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Immediate
Collections of neural signals
Segregated moments
Of undisclosed reality
Uncensored
Fragmented instances of time
Electric waves
Absorbed and propagated
Immediate
Events drip like blood
Carriers of life and death
So pointless in their beauty
Inevitable
Percepts disattached
Their frequency numbs
Emotional consciousness
Recurring
State of unbounded awareness
Unconditional
Fade into raw existence
Collections of neural signals
Segregated moments
Of undisclosed reality
Uncensored
Fragmented instances of time
Electric waves
Absorbed and propagated
Immediate
Events drip like blood
Carriers of life and death
So pointless in their beauty
Inevitable
Percepts disattached
Their frequency numbs
Emotional consciousness
Recurring
State of unbounded awareness
Unconditional
Fade into raw existence
Literature
if you have ghosts (you have everything)
my hands were blue and so was i
and i had everything:
a christmas tree
a guitar tuned by humidity
a dark library underneath my pillow
and a voice whose words jerk, jut
and stab quietly into one another
so i may never understand;
it was two AM, dawn of a decade
and here a ghost has me motionless in 1933.
--
i never met my grandfather till today--
he dies in 1975
and in 2020 he is born
at the bottom of a drawer in the kitchen,
his coffin and crib:
he is swaddled in moth-eaten dishtowels by a nameless undertaker
(or perhaps an autophagic author himself);
his crib and coffin:
he is buried a lifetime
(deaf to my cacophonous lifetime et ceter
Literature
Not Here
I cannot reach you
no matter how far
I stretch my heart
you escape my arms
and I grasp the nothing
of where you refuse
to be.
Literature
A Dream Never...
A thirsty soul derailed
A life wasted and failed
A dream never to be
A poor spirit, that's me
A mortal on this path
That's filled with woe and wrath
A dream never come true
These days I do so rue
And I want
And I need
And I wish
To proceed
I don't know
I don't care
If I get
Anywhere
A person lost all hope
They tried their best to cope
A dream never realized
Existence so despised
And I want...
A human that fell down
They greet the cold ground
A dream never grew wings
A puppet on life's strings
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I would say one of my best attempts so far to capture the state of mind I (thanks god) manage to achieve without drugs now. A state when one looses herself in immediate reality and perceives as things around flow through the body and mind, without emotionally attaching to them. It is when one feels so beautifully simple and yet able to embrace all complexities of the world around. Hard to explain in other ways than in metaphors of the presented poetry.
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Well, it is very well written, and the metaphors are very well used. Also, I understand how you feel and what you are trying to tell us in your artist comment. I know it because when I write I enter in a meditative state, and no I do not use drugs, never did but simply when I open my writing tool or I take the pencil I enter in a state or trance if you wish and I start to write. The feeling is amazing, with pure meditation you can achieve it as well, and you don't have to use any human made materials to achieve the state where you open up.